CzeryWassierSwizier's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Give it Pt. 2]

I like the duck. :P

Really like 1:15 - 1:30. It was very lifting.
Loved the chords and piano right there.
You took the time to move develop some variations for the piano.It has a very jazzy feel to it and I like it.

One thing I would have liked to hear would be some kind of melodic structure, like a lead for instance. You have snippets of melodies here and there but there are moments in the song where I feel like it needs some amazing solo instrument that plays some theme or pattern. The melody would help give the song a strong focus and prevent the listener from getting lost in the dazzling effects you made (which weren't bad but kind of stood out without a melody to lean on).

Nevertheless, I still think this is a great song. I expect to hear more great songs from you in the near future!

-Czery

[Last of the Season]

This song makes me want to get up and dance! :)
Loved the synths and bassline. The dance elements are very engaging and catchy.
I especially liked the strong beat you laid. (very addicting)
If anything it could be improved it would be the mastering as you mentioned in the description.

Looking forward to your next piece. :D
-Czery

[Aftermath [Stephen Stripling]]

Dat V chord.
You had a nice motif going on there although I see potential for the song to be even more embellished. For instance, I felt like you could have brought out the strings a little more. Perhaps a little melody here and there by a violin soloist. Maybe even bring in the brass section. It's a good start and I look forward to hearing more from you. :)

stephenstripling responds:

Thanks for the thoughts man! I'll keep those in mind next time around :)

[Frostbitten Plains]

Your snare sound like a machine gun. -.-
That aside, I liked the feeling of confusion and almost uncertain mood that the song conveys.

-Czery

SirKoto51 responds:

The snare does have a very piercing sound to it indeed xD I guess that's what I get for using the default garageband plugins... or for just using garageband at all P: One of these days I'm going to buy FL Studio... one of these days...

[With Haste!]

Great theme, very thoroughly developed. During some of the more upbeat parts, you could increase the loudness of the chord or even beef them up by adding distortion. That would help with adding complexity and make your piece more interesting.

-Czery

Mawnz responds:

Thank you for listening and leaving feedback, it is much appreciated.
I updated it trying to add what you suggested. Thanks again!

[Everything (Aero)]

Your song truly captures the essence of DnB. Your artistic talent is worth recognizing.

Keep it up! :)
-czery

AeroMusic responds:

what a lovely review, thanks mate :)

[Strikeout]

Nice synths.
Consider adding more structural variety in the song. (the bridge @ 1:33 was nice)
You seem to using the same minor motiff and chord progressions.

CrusadeOfficial responds:

There is only one progression in this song. It's put through gross beat and dblue glitch to add variation in different parts. Not from laziness either lol, I'm seeing what interesting results i can achieve.

Minor progressions rock! haha.

All the synths are 3xosc

Thanks for the review :)

[velvet]

Loved the opening. The song had an almost folk like aspect.
Some of tambourine was off a bit. Otherwise. I liked the mood very much.

[Near yet Far Away]

Sweet. I feel like I'm flyin' :)

Shenron1146 responds:

Fly away my friend.