CzeryWassierSwizier's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Hotline]

The opening was a little slow although I did like the organ.
Something I would work on would be the rhythm, which felt a little repetitive and spacious at times. Don't be afraid to add some extra percussion instruments and make the beat "groovy".

As most people have already mentioned the song does have unique and lots of potential elements however it could use more structural variations.

keep up the good work! :)

Lethal-Input responds:

Thanks for the feedback!

[Live Recording Loops]

Very soothing. The instruments were simple yet effective.
I'm not sure how you intended to use the original piece but I would have liked to hear some kind of transition (simple fade would do) between tracks. Our of the five tracks I liked old clock most. :)

Keep it up!

DjGubkafish responds:

Thank you for feedback

If i faded them then they wouldn't loop by themselves properly . They are unfaded so people can cut them out in original format and use each loop individually .

Otherwise i would have to upload them with 3d party site and give people links .

[Aftermath [Stephen Stripling]]

Dat V chord.
You had a nice motif going on there although I see potential for the song to be even more embellished. For instance, I felt like you could have brought out the strings a little more. Perhaps a little melody here and there by a violin soloist. Maybe even bring in the brass section. It's a good start and I look forward to hearing more from you. :)

stephenstripling responds:

Thanks for the thoughts man! I'll keep those in mind next time around :)

[Frostbitten Plains]

Your snare sound like a machine gun. -.-
That aside, I liked the feeling of confusion and almost uncertain mood that the song conveys.

-Czery

SirKoto51 responds:

The snare does have a very piercing sound to it indeed xD I guess that's what I get for using the default garageband plugins... or for just using garageband at all P: One of these days I'm going to buy FL Studio... one of these days...

[With Haste!]

Great theme, very thoroughly developed. During some of the more upbeat parts, you could increase the loudness of the chord or even beef them up by adding distortion. That would help with adding complexity and make your piece more interesting.

-Czery

Mawnz responds:

Thank you for listening and leaving feedback, it is much appreciated.
I updated it trying to add what you suggested. Thanks again!

[Everything (Aero)]

Your song truly captures the essence of DnB. Your artistic talent is worth recognizing.

Keep it up! :)
-czery

AeroMusic responds:

what a lovely review, thanks mate :)

[Strikeout]

Nice synths.
Consider adding more structural variety in the song. (the bridge @ 1:33 was nice)
You seem to using the same minor motiff and chord progressions.

CrusadeOfficial responds:

There is only one progression in this song. It's put through gross beat and dblue glitch to add variation in different parts. Not from laziness either lol, I'm seeing what interesting results i can achieve.

Minor progressions rock! haha.

All the synths are 3xosc

Thanks for the review :)

[Near yet Far Away]

Sweet. I feel like I'm flyin' :)

Shenron1146 responds:

Fly away my friend.

[Past]

Liked the piano motif. The piano itself could be just a little softer, maybe some dampening. Some of the notes feel forced and sudden. Loved the synths.

Overall, made me feel very nostalgic. Keep up the great work!

-Czery

CarvelsCake responds:

thank you so much for the comment ! nostalgia is exactly what i want to express with this track.

[Walking in the rain]

A well composed dubstep-classical hybrid!
Keep up the great work!

Hyzone responds:

Thank you! I will do my best. :)