CzeryWassierSwizier's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

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Not exactly dnb, more hardcore/techno.

Minimalistic yet somehow addicting. Could use a little more buildup at 1:04 maybe some drop or something. Also feel free to add a bass in there.

[Eyfy]

Solid beats. NIce hook.
The buildup was slightly anticlimactic.
It 's a good start but it can use more development in structure and melody.

Surkol responds:

Thanks! I appreciate the feedback :)

[Log In]

Was hooked at the very beginning!
This stuff is funky. :)

[Golden Axe 3 Cursed Allies]

Nice VG music. (not dnb) :P
I really enjoyed the hero/adventure theme you had going there.
The snare is a little cheesy tho. Otherwise very good.

GinSauzo responds:

LOL :D

[Eggs in the Basket]

All my eggs are goin' in one basket!
Great stuff but too short. I want to hear more!

Xorberax responds:

Hold your eggs man, the track will meet its fame one day.

[anti-phantom - Love (LQ)]

Pretty decent song.
Really liked the latter uplifting pads in there.
Some of the glitchy stuff seem to be a little awkward in comparison to the rest of the song. Perhaps you could find a better way to integrate those spasms into the song in a more seamless manner. Not a glitch expert so can't say much else. Aside from the intro, I really did enjoy the rest of the song.

Keep up the great work!

[Moving On]

Really like the pads and atmosphere you had.

I was kind of expecting your song to turn into some hardcore/oldskool piece but it just had that ambient texture throughout. As a result, the strong dance drums kind of overpower the rest of the song.

Good job overall.

Chemiqals responds:

Thank you!

[Hotline]

The opening was a little slow although I did like the organ.
Something I would work on would be the rhythm, which felt a little repetitive and spacious at times. Don't be afraid to add some extra percussion instruments and make the beat "groovy".

As most people have already mentioned the song does have unique and lots of potential elements however it could use more structural variations.

keep up the good work! :)

Lethal-Input responds:

Thanks for the feedback!

[Tiny Seedling]

Soothing yet somehow addicting as well.
Must hear more!

[Live Recording Loops]

Very soothing. The instruments were simple yet effective.
I'm not sure how you intended to use the original piece but I would have liked to hear some kind of transition (simple fade would do) between tracks. Our of the five tracks I liked old clock most. :)

Keep it up!

DjGubkafish responds:

Thank you for feedback

If i faded them then they wouldn't loop by themselves properly . They are unfaded so people can cut them out in original format and use each loop individually .

Otherwise i would have to upload them with 3d party site and give people links .